I'm sorry, but I had to vote the submission with 2 and review as 1.5 (I usually always make it worse in review than in Submission rate, since I want to help people improve their stuff)
There is nothing else I can hear than a loud repetetive synthetic sound which makes it boring.
If you added piano, then it was a different story.
As I can understand you are new to this.
In which programme did you make this anyway?